All Comments on 'The Bonding Chronicles Ch. 13'

Excellent read, thank you for this chapter.

as usual another awesome read , thank you for another chapter to enjoy.can't wait for more i just wish i had the imagination and writing skills like this ( but then i might spend all my time in my head !! ).

Once again great story

That was great!

Thank you.

Can't wait for the next one.

Great chapter love the way it all was resolved. I like how you have Mercedes freeing herself strengthing her self image. Now the questions

How much stronger is the family now

Are Tan I'm and Mercedes going to be added or have they already been

Is Sara pregnant yet or not since she is in heat

Is Karen or his Mom pregnant

How many pregnancies are there now

Will Sara have one baby or a litter

What are his parents going to say when they return

How is the wolf hunt going to go

Is the pack going to be involved (more allies for everyone)

Return to the clouder will they be accepted

Looking forward to the next chapter greatly. This story is as additive to me as three square meals. The setting of The Northwest is a big draw for me as well, hope to see more of the jackalope he and phyco could interaction could be a fun to see.

Thanks again for your time writing this. Feels like the stroy is really starting now

Another great chapter in your ever building story.

On page 3 there is a wrong name used a few times. Will is used when it should be Brandon,.

Thanks for the pointer about the three "Will" references, I have updated those and submitted the changed version. It should appear within the next few days.

As far as pregnancies go: it is not something that will likely happen for a while, though it's definitely a consideration for the characters. Sara and Andrew already discussed it, and Sara went on the pill as a result, but with Karen in their family, and other players entering the fold it may become more of a point of exploration -- however brief.

Glad everyone seems to be enjoying this latest chapter.

Regarding writing, and creativity; to be honest, "Three Square Meals" is what got me to try my hand at writing, and this story is what came out of it. I have learned a lot, and continue to grow, finding my voice and personal style. I would strongly recommend finding a character you like, and just write. You never know until you try.

If you read a lot, you will likely surprise yourself, since your mind has been learning about writing through the works you have read, even if you were not aware that it was doing it. That is what happened with me, I think. I had some skill as a young kid, but never developed it, and in Highschool I tried my hand at writing, never finding my voice and always getting lost in the details of every scene.

I still find myself heading down that road, from time to time, but have thankfully found a way to integrate just enough detail to build the atmosphere, and create a sense of place.

Anyways, please try. If you do write, and like what comes out of it, publish to the site. It's scary. and not everyone will like what you do, but write for yourself and stick to your interests. What you write will be all the better for sticking with what you enjoy. That is why I will never have overt rape in this story -- though there are a lot of references to it -- and many other extreme fetishes will likely never find their way in.

Trying to find a way to integrate my fetishes into this story was a challenge at first, but I like how it turned out. Andrew's nature, and the way the world works, lends itself to his powers, so it feels -- at least to me -- less artificial.

It has been long enough since your last chapter that I began to wonder. Glad to see you put another out and your doing good. Now please excuse me while I go back to refreshing Teflers page.

Five stars again I wish there were more to give it deserves ten at least.

I give you 10 out of 5 stars!!!!! If this was a book I would buy it in a heart beat lol

too bad the bonding of andrew and karen had to be done under such dire circumstances and in the glade but like that andrew gave Sara her new power in the nick of time. the glade is different from the dream world from that andrew and Sara go to when there asleep cause it seems like it is connected or is it own universe. good story please continue the amazing story will wait patiently

Okey, awesome story so far. I am realy looking forward to the next chapters. Consider me a fan. Your writing is inspiring.

Love this story hope life is settled down and letting you write more

I have an outline in place, and am making very slow progress. The challenges of fatherhood have not been overstated, and writing has been relegated to an infrequent excercise.

I miss the days of being able to publish once every two weeks, but fear I'm looking at a longer timeline than the one I had optimistically set before. Likely, it will take me closer to two months between the next few chapters, just because of the feed-wake-sleep cycle of my little fairy.

Little one's definitely change things be they babies, puppies or kittens

You might include some of the changes you are experiencing to the story by added responsibilities to younger friends like Stew from both Andrew and Sara just a thought and a suggestion that crossed my mind. thanks again for the great stories

You ruined my fapping session! Here I was expecting to knock one out in half an hour and I found myself reading 4 hours later. I'm not complaining too much though; I like finding stories that hook me so much I end up skipping sex scenes to get to the plot.

[Technical assessment]

Energy limitations for spells are realistic and add complexity to the story- something many writers hand-wave for simplicity. Taking this step bumps up the series level of quality significantly.

Interpersonal relationships with -and between- characters is excellent. Each person feels distinctly like individuals rather than glossing over certain aspects and focusing only on the sexually relevant ones. I've only seen a few typos here and there, but given the amount of material that's pretty damn good.

Sex scenes have just the right amount of tenderness -minus Brandon- and detail. I've been keeping an eye out for good examples of written orgasms so I can study for my own stories and this one is one of them. I was a little surprised Andrew and Sara didn't resort to anal until birth control could be sorted out but given that neither of them had any inclination to watch porn and are both virgins, I didn't mind too much. I did blitz through the series pretty fast so I'm not entirely sure, but I don't remember the birth control thing getting sorted out before they got to pound town. Did I miss something? Either way, I don't mind. Impregnation, or even the serious risk of it, is a huge turn on.

Mystery and the unknown are themes well used. The connection between the gym teacher and Andrew's parents; the actual activities of his parents; the reasons for Vivi's extreme violations of privacy; the vague allusions to the Council being a bunch of d-bags and hinting at a much bigger world out there; the level of interference characters like the Allfather (Odin?); the scarcity of information regarding magical abilities- all of that adds richness to a good story.

[Overall assessment and comments]

Sharing many of the same traits and experiences in highschool as Andrew, I connected more with this story on a higher level than most. That you immediately started with physical descriptions that weren't Adonis/Aphrodite analogues were also major points. I'm sick of seeing authors with default perfect characters free of blemishes, acne or otherwise.

The whole time-warp glade thing and the actual explanations for it were fun to read and a nice change from 'it just is.' I imagine it will certainly become useful for training when mom and dad are brought in the loop. I expect there will be a great deal of conflict between what the military wants and what they want.

I enjoyed all of it, really. As I've said before, tender lovin' is a big turn on for me and the little details like when Sara first meets the parents and immediately goes to Andrew's side is one excellent example. Being able to connect to characters on a personal level, rather than a mere physical one, elevates the intensity.

I'm so glad the chapter after the kidnapping cliffhanger was available by the time I found this story, otherwise I would have been very disappointed. I really look forward to reading more! :)

THE BEST! THE BEST! THE BEST! THE BEST!

Family first always, I will happily wait for the next chapter.

Wonderful story, excellent read so please don't stop now.

Congratulations.

I want to start this post by saying, thank you to eveyone who has reached out and given me such wonderful feedback and well-wishes for my newly expanded family. It has been almost seven weeks since I brought my little girl home, and they have been the most challenging, and yet rewarding weeks of my life.

As I have promised, I am continuing to make progress -- slow, slow, progress -- on further chapters, but after receiving the same feedback several times, I have decided to begin publishing chapters in advance on Patreon:

https://www.patreon.com/panther_parabola

Currently, my plan is to release new chapters to Patreon a week before they are published here. They will be paid posts, meaning that patrons will have access to them as soon as they are posted, and will be charged the patronage level they have chosen at the start of the next month.

I am also going to be posting short asides and snippets from upcoming chapters as free patron-only ($3+) posts leading up to the release of each chapter.

With my daughter in mind, I need to find a way to make this hobby help my family. For those of you who are patient, chapters will continue to be posted here, you will just have to wait a week longer than the fine people who help to support my hobby. For those that want a sneak peak at what is coming up, or to be more involved with how things move forward, I strongly suggest you help to support me, and join the community at Patreon.

I hope you all understand this decision, and will continue to enjoy the story I have worked so hard to create.

Chapters 1 through 13 have all be posted to Patreon, downloadable by patrons as PDF documents. Chapters 1 through 3 are available to everyone for download as PDF documents.

The original, present tense versions of Chapters 1 through 3 are also available to patrons as PDF documents. These are such a rich part of the history of this story, that I felt like they needed to be available for my fans.

An aside from Chapter 14, called "Strange Customs," is available on Patreon to all $3+ patrons, and sets the tone for how I hope to use Patreon to keep my fans involved in the creation of this story.

Again, thank you all.

For those of you wondering, Chapter 14 is now live on Patreon, and will appear here in about a week. I wanted to take this opportunity to get it up before the 4th of July weekend, when my life will again go crazy.

Hope this finds you all well, and I trust you will all have a wonderful weekend, holiday or no holiday.

This is a wonderful story. I want more.

Is it all over now?

Please extend the tale .... maybe a book 2 ? !The characters are great and the story line is too good to just leave dangling.

This is a great series.

Bloke I've been reading this and the last chapter and this were fucking excellent. I have been reading max 2 hrs at a time but tonight and read for 4 hrs. I could stop. That cliff hanger. Omg. Needed to read what happened. Kudos. Cant wait to read more

Ok you are redemed for last chapter's cliffhanger.

This was great and you only made your real time readers wait for a month to finish the story arc.

Well done. It is way after my bedtime and I am still reading your story.

Too many authors here write a cliffhanger and then take a year to publish the next chapter, or abandon the story.

Excellent!

Wanted to give u another 5 stars but app wouldnt let me. Just kno ur work is being totally enjoyed.

It's always great to see abusers get theirs especially at the hands those they abused. Nice way to wrap up the chapter.

Excellent chapter.