All Comments on 'The Bookseller'

what a great story, one of my favorites

Again, nicely done.

Loved the female POV!

Nice premise.

A bit too artsy for my taste.

Would have liked more step-by-step details.

Would have liked more dialog during the sexual interaction. Is that how you like it? Did you masturbate to fantasizing about me? How often? What did you imagine me doing to you and you doing to me? What was it that got you so excited that you lost control and just had to cum?

And, you wrote, "They'd browse the store, swing by the Art & Photography section to oggle the open books like this, then buy something else on their way out to justify why they were in my store in the first place. " You meant OGLE, not OGGLE (which is not a word)>

Four stars.

What a lot of fun! I really enjoyed the setting and the premise, and the sexiness of being both book-loving and hot.

Thought the female POV worked great,

Well done

Your stories are my new titillating faves. Long live the longing librarian.

Awesome! Thank You so much for the Story!

Very nice! Well constructed and loving but also passionate and wild. The shifts inbetween the book seller's bodice ripper and the larger story and the silly yet sexy tone that resulted only added to the cute and sneaky seduction between the two principle characters. I especially enjoyed the fact that they both seemed to enjoy themselves but that didn't mean it was never awkward. Added a much welcome sense of realism to an otherwise fantastic scenario.

Thanks a lot!