All Comments on 'The Bookstore Ch. 02'

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mel_pomenemel_pomeneabout 11 years ago
A really first-class story!

This is a writing coalition made in heaven - thank you - five stars and more, please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Excellent !!!!!!!!!!!!!

This story is wonderful I love it our style of writing is so unique please write more I'm begging you pretty please write some more I have never found a story that captivates me so it makes me want to find a master even more.... Please post more chapters oh please....

1badmonkey1badmonkeyabout 11 years ago
Wonderful

Please continue, this story is excellent. I can not wait for Chapter 3.

Thank you.

Bibliophile614Bibliophile614about 11 years ago
Please, please

Don't leave us hanging! This story is amazing. Well written and sexy. 5 Stars!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
ok

I really loved the first one but this one hmmm.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
A bit much

I absolutely loved the first one, but this one was hard for me to read, I supposed I shouldn't be surprised considering the book Marie was so obsessed with, but reading about her crawling around like that made me cringe.

aisielynnaisielynnabout 10 years ago

*smiles*

another interesting chapter.... i'm curious to read the next installment to see just where He is taking her.

kristabackristabacabout 10 years ago

I loved the first chapter and this one op to the being outside part.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
I’d never heard of The Claiming of Sleeping Beauty

Not until I read this story some years back, so thanks for that too.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

okay one question why did he threw her out naked from backdoor to alley the previous n8?was it part of her humiliation training?

and thankgod he used standard and safer nipple clamps instead of sharp edged paper clips

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

i loved how he teased her by reading the book to her in his deep sensual voice and then made her read and made her beg for punishment from him and the naked crawling humiliation

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