All Comments on 'The Bookstore Ch. 09'

This was a great story. I really enjoyed it. Thank you for finishing it. Hopefully we will read more about Marie and her master in the future. Please keep writing; you are very good.

I read every chapter and eagerly looked forward to the next one. I am sorry to see it end, and hope there is more of Marie and her Master in the future.

Thanks for telling us the story was ending. I appreciate knowing that and sadly I won't be looking for any more.

All the best to you and your co writer.

I read the series on ur other name. And reread it on here I'm bummed this is it tell ur coauther u have fans that really want more. I really want to know if she was able to stay away or if she kept the collar on rrrr ijust want more :-)

This has been one of the more interesting stories I have followed lately. Do you have anything new for us soon?

Thanks for the kind words, and I'm glad you've enjoyed this series. As far as anything new goes, I've been working on my second erotic novel but have no idea when that will be done. You can find the first one on Amazon (and elsewhere):

http://www.amazon.com/Invisible-Girl-ebook/dp/B002SSUV7Y/ref=sr_1_1?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1364999501&sr=1-1&keywords=zen+mackie

And of course my older stories are still available here on Literotica:

http://www.literotica.com:81/stories/memberpage.php?uid=533505&page=submissions

And that's not the response this story should elicit. It's just so contrived and unbelievable.

Great story - loved all 9 chapters! I especially appreciated your thematic pacing firstly in the early chapters on Marie's complete control and humiliation which is then counterbalanced later on by a gradually tender appreciation of what a total submissive he has found and developed in her! For that reason I hope you will take this relationship further along in another equally torrid tale!

Im a submissive and i absolutely loved this story! If you have more , randijo2206@gmail.com or 9107971106 ;)

This series is amazing - thank you so much

loved everyrhing except the fact that

he hates her tits .yes now i am confirmed .if i had been her master i would have spent hours on her boobs and nipples after toturing them through prolonged duration in nipple clamps and as harshly as he pulls them apart from her nipples and now her poor clit

punishment at its place but he really sucks at aftercaring or reward

he only punishes and punishes and punishes with very little rewards

after all the pain her nipples has gone through what he gave her just mere pathetic weak kisses really?

zenmackie do you hate tities si much that you would give them enormous pain at punishment but zero attention and care even during aftercare or sex

really his attitude towards her nipple alone made me so much mad at this guy i was ready to ignore every single good gesture if any from his side to her