All Comments on 'The Bookstore on Conner'

What a perfectly romantic story. An old bookstore is the setting for what would ordinarily be a dull drab encounter. This writer's ability to enhance his characters Jeffrey and Charlene livens up this pleasant read. How they find each other is endearing.

A perfect ending for your story.

Boyd

Good start, very rushed end, I think it had alot of potential but needed much more character development and why skip to the engagement idk I like seeing the relationship develop. Just my $0.02 thanks for writing wish u well.

Very well writen! A lovely short story! :)