by michellephoenix275
I'm struggling...what happened to asking questions? He has taken away her ability to do so not to mention ask question regarding her health and well being. Nothing like getting her knocked up during their first encounter. While the story is hot there needs to be more conversation on consent especially with someone who is a novice and naive IMHO.
I love it, and I hate it. What happened to informed and consensual? He told her that night was for questions--then gags her and orders someone else to use her. Do they talk now, after she has been used and abused? Will he allow her to express her disgust? Will he allow her to vent her anger? Will he at least acknowledge the crudity of his behavior?
Give him some humanity. So far, all he has going for him are his looks and his money. Those are not nearly enough.
shemar45
Totally agree with an earlier poster--this IS hot, HOT, even!--and I can't wait for more!
Very well written. Love to see her limits explored and her training commenced!!
This is a great story. Can't wait till the rest of the series comes out