All Comments on 'The Boss's Pet Ch. 01'

I liked the story and would be interested in reading a continuation. If you could have your character do more analysis of her mental state it would be more interesting. How does she feel about this? What about her relationship with her husband. Does she want it to continue? You did some foreshadowing about an end of her relationship with D. Is the end of her relationship something she worries about? These would all bear exploring in a sequel.

You have a good handle on the eroticism and the D/s nature of the relationship in this story. I'm interested to see where you can take these characters. You do need a bit of proofreading, however, as a number of errors creeped in.

I don't usually go for d/s stuff, but I have to say that this was a very interesting story, holding my attention from start to finish [if it IS finished], and particularly well-written, beginning with getting "Boss's" correct in your title, rather than the usual error of "boss'". Keep going - I'm fascinated. Freddy

A well written story, there are a few spelling errors but they dis not distract me from the story. i am looking forward to reading the next chapter.

Still one of my favorite stories.