All Comments on 'The Bottom Tier'

by Cruel2BKind

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amber1312amber1312about 13 years ago
need

more of this story its far to beautiful to be a one shot wonder.

nomoretears00nomoretears00about 13 years ago
Oh no...

LOL, you *can't* leave this as a one-shot deal. It's way too good!

meganjoadamsmeganjoadamsabout 13 years ago
more please

I really did like this story and would like to read more.

CryptictatCryptictatabout 13 years ago

When i first started reading this i was sure i wouldnt like it, but decided to at least see where it took me. Now i cant get enough of it, I just plain need more. lol

seeker71seeker71about 13 years ago
Good deal!

I won't bombard you woth messages asking for another chapter until you are done with Poor Simon. I think that's a good deal! I really do hope you decide this is more than a one-shot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Don't Stop

It was great. Gave it five stars. It is a unique story, and am looking forward to reading more....Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Loved it

I don't find your work as arousing as I do irresistible and intriguing. I want to read more and my mind spins into tangents and possibilities for characters and actions until I am lost in your worlds. I am a reader of poor simon as well. Please keep writing.

allusive1allusive1about 13 years ago
Great characters

I loved Ladyboy -- very endearing. You've painted an interesting world and the ending was sweet. I would love to read a chapter where they actually do have sex -- after you finish Poor Simon, of course :-). -- Ally

AkshunLoveAkshunLoveover 12 years ago
Jesus, so moving

I felt like crying for poor Kip. Wow, what an amazing story! Kind of reminds me of Blade Runner. Really excellent work :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

I like the dystopian world and the happy ending i actually do feel bad for kip. It was a nice reading experience

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Amazing

I usually hate stories like this but this was way too good to stop reading

CaramelunicornCaramelunicornover 1 year ago

Poor adorable Kip! He deserves happiness and safety!

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