All Comments on 'The Bound Knight Ch. 10'

Thanks for writing - this is a fun story, in its odd balance between extreme and over the top, and I’m looking forward to seeing where it goes. Am really hoping to see Eve emerge as a dominatrix rather than more scenes with annoying twit Moldred. *****

I'm rooting for Eve, Vassimir and the girls in the upcoming fight(s). Story is well−written and engaging, but man, often way too grimdark for my taste. Hope to see Eve winning, keeping her "freedom" and breaking out of her submissive shell in the coming episodes

I dare say this is the best story currently being written right now on this site. I disagree with the other commenter about making Eve into a dominatrix. I think that would break the character and the foundations of the world you've built.

Absolutely fantastic story, Eve's and Vassimirs' characters are really good. Please continue.

Agree with others that this story has been fantastic.

Look forward to whatever other plans you have for the series. I've been writing a scifi story about a brutal setting (mostly unpublished, but many more chapters incoming!) and seems we enjoy some of the same tropes, though I like seeing them in a fantasy setting as well. Excellent read!

Some comments seem intent on steering away from grimdark and having Eve be less submissive, but it would be a mistake imo to let commentors influence your story writing choices. Once creative projects start pandering to satisfy squeaky wheels, they lose their luster... There is plenty of room for grimdark tales, one need look no further than the popularity of WH40K to find proof of that.

don't listen to any of the people here. Eve just picked up the girl that she said she liked right at the start when she was punished for missing a cobweb; Vassimir's homosexuality really fits his character and his worldview. The entire story is incredibly internally consistent to a degree that I have only seen in the ASOIAF series. You clearly have a vision for this tale and people trying to influence it to fit their own quirks will just damage it. You are doing better than any author previously. Great work yet again, just as many others I anticipate the release of the next chapter

I am enjoying this story tremendously. Erotica with a story and plot is so much better than the normal slop that gets posted everywhere and in every media. Keep up the good work.