by The_Technician
In an attempt to be clever, you got lost in the words. This simply wasn't an entertaining story to read.
Makes me wonder how much of your story is fact and how much you created to please your readers. Quite a good story, I must say.
The Technician isn't on my favourites list for nothing. A very talented storyteller and this deserves to do well.
For a very good writer, you choose some very silly plots. Not up to your usual standards of intrigue and eroticia
Of course, I had heard about Queen Boudica before this story, so her words of her "not truly losing" are quite accurate - after all, how many people are known, much less remembered, 2000 years after their death. Unusual spell and spell breaking, but I enjoyed the originality as well as the overall pacing of the story. Nicely done!
Not my usual story / category choice but a great read. I felt like I sort of knew the characters quite well and the narrative flowed easily. It sounded natural to say the least. Great job.
This is my Sci-Fi, or historical fiction than BDSM. However, thoroughly enjoyable, as usual