All Comments on 'The Bound Queen - A Halloween Story'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Awesome

story with a little bit of intrigue!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
I think a pumpkin fell on your head.

In an attempt to be clever, you got lost in the words. This simply wasn't an entertaining story to read.

JudyLeeJudyLeeover 8 years ago
Interesting.

Makes me wonder how much of your story is fact and how much you created to please your readers. Quite a good story, I must say.

MasterfuljimMasterfuljimover 8 years ago
Got to say

The Technician isn't on my favourites list for nothing. A very talented storyteller and this deserves to do well.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Superb

...as usual. And a touch of humor, also as usual.

5*...as usual.

John

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

For a very good writer, you choose some very silly plots. Not up to your usual standards of intrigue and eroticia

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Original, different, memorable

Of course, I had heard about Queen Boudica before this story, so her words of her "not truly losing" are quite accurate - after all, how many people are known, much less remembered, 2000 years after their death. Unusual spell and spell breaking, but I enjoyed the originality as well as the overall pacing of the story. Nicely done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great.

Not my usual story / category choice but a great read. I felt like I sort of knew the characters quite well and the narrative flowed easily. It sounded natural to say the least. Great job.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Great.

Loved the story. It held my attention throughout.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

This is my Sci-Fi, or historical fiction than BDSM. However, thoroughly enjoyable, as usual

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I was born in the Midwest, but have traveled extensively throughout the United States and Canada. Currently I am full-time camping throughout the United States and Canada and spending my time writing for both fun and profit. Books with longer stories such as the kind posted on...