All Comments on 'The Box'

Hey, Great read.

Keep up the good work.

WB

Did I miss the part where he used a condom (she wasn't sexually active)? I don't think they agreed on impregnation. Hmm....

A well written story with the tension kept up. I do agree with the previous comment about the use of condoms, unless impregnating is at the heart of the story. Nevertheless, this is an excellent story, thoroughly enjoyable and well worth five stars. Thank you.

I saw Chapter 2 in the incest story list today and something about the title intrigued me. I’m really glad I sought out this first chapter because it was great. Well written, excellent pace and very believable, all which make for a very erotic 5 star effort.

Now on to Chapter 2!

Great story telling, even when "Particia" appeared, once. On to the next chapter.

It was well written, believable, and a lovely, but sexy story.

A sad story in the lost of a Father. Both being cheated out of a time together. Now at least they can share something together to help to fill the void left by a Father and Husband taken away so early.

I look forward to reading Chapter 2.

That's what I like to see, some good old fashioned incest! Drew enjoying his mom's pussy as much as Patricia enjoyed finally getting some cock. I can just imagine how much fun that would be. Five Stars

there are time a simply told tale will hit the mark with the reader for one of us who never knew a mother's love you did so and more

I think your story is very believable, moved along at a good Pace, and will make a great multiple chapter series. On to Chapter 2!

For more. Excellent, believable story. You have excellent writing skills, now give us more! Let's see some raunchiness in the next chapter. Please?!!

i am NOT interested in bondage...

Very nice incest read gave it 5 stars and waiting on next part!!!!!!!!!!!