All Comments on 'The Boy Next Door'

It was really a great tale up to that point.

kind of an abrupt ending. this story could have been so much better witha longer build-up and a better ending. Still better than most of the romance stories on Lit.

You are writing about "the boy next door"? And when he sees you at the party you could feel "her" hairs stand up" on "her" arms? Are you writing about "the boy next door" or his sister?

Do you believe in proof-reading your story before you submit it? When I got to that, it totally turned me off....obviously you are a wannabe "stud writer" that is letting your dick dictate as to what you are writing as you dream, or you are plagarizing another story and changing the characters, or both?

... to see you continue a series of "The Boy Next Door". For us to grow with your characters as well as help cultivate your writing skills would be marvelous. Looking forward to reading more =)

Good basic story, love the emotions. However you do need to make sure you profread before submitting. Make sure you keep your story in the same person; in some places it's in first person, in some places it's in second person. Overall, keep up the good work. And yeah, the ass thing is not my cup of tea either, but you can't please everyone! So keep writing, I look forward to your next story!

Nice story, until the power play in bed. Especially for someone coming out of an abusive relationship, this should be a real turn-off. The inconsistent verb tenses were also distracting.