All Comments on 'The Boys Next Door Ch. 05'

I love that she couldn't be without Ian while with Brendan! Team Ian!

mean edging brendan was ridiculously hot. Ian all the way but that upped the ante

Hope it's Ian she ends up:). Gotta love bad boys:)

Dear lord, it just gets better.

Ha! I'd never heard the term "edging" before -- thanks, Anon, for the new vocab word. And thanks to everyone for your comments. I'm so happy Ian has some admirers out there...

Holy moly ... this story just keeps getting hotter ... licking the tears off her face is probably the hottest part ...

Damn...

I'm so hooked on this story and am totally on team Ian too! Would love to see their relationship develop more outside of the bedroom...

More. I need.

Please write fast! I love it and need more!

I was rereading chapter 4 this morning and when I went back and saw chapter 5 waiting was so thrilled. It almost feels like it's one of my own fantasies.

Oh my....amazing yet again! Love Ian and Diana! More please ASAP!!

Love this series! Can't wait for the next installment!!

I just love this series! Keep at it please.

Thank you for continuing the story. I love that you balanced out the last chapter with a little Diana-Brendan action. I can't wait to see the aftermath of this chapter. Please update soon!!

Poor Brendan doesn't even seem to be necessary anymore since she so clearly prefers Ian and both boys clearly know it. :(

Keep going best series so far.......

SilverMuse,

This series may have been the hottest thing I have ever read. It's like you took all my fantasies and put them into eloquent writing. There's just something so alluring about the twins and the way Brendan's older brotherly attitude contrasts with Ian and his mischief, not to mention how Diana even though a virgin and (previously) inexperienced with boys is a secret slut.

The word porn though! I felt myself literally clenching when I read the paragraph in this chapter after Ian jumped into her room like a cat and she was surprised over how he didn't comment that she was naked and writhing in his brother's arms. Also the sweat falling onto her was nice.

Everything about this is PERFECTION, and I hope you keep the updates coming. You could seriously turn this into a published book- the talent in the writing is evident.

<3, Rae

The best sequence in a long time! Very well done!

I like the Ian thing. Brendon doesn't seem affected emotionally like Ian is. Bren reminds me of a sociopath. It's insanely hot. Lol. Anyway, I like your story telling. You're a genius!

I like the Ian thing. Brendon doesn't seem affected emotionally like Ian is. Bren reminds me of a sociopath. It's insanely hot. Lol. Anyway, I like your story telling. You're a genius!

Hope the series continues

in a way that is very well planned . Beautiful complexity and nicely differentiating the two brothers. Love it!

Are you going to do more of these?

The story gets hotter with each chapter! More please ASAP!!!

It was such a pleasure to read your story. Very sexy and well written and even without the stupid spelling mistakes so common on this site. Please continue to write looking forward to reading more of your stories.

Oh my..... this is fucking amazing!!

The BEST literotica story I've read in a LONG time. Absolutely marvelous. Thank you thank you thank you! I love how Ian has been in love with her forever and was totally hurt when she stopped talking to him and reacted by stopping talking to her. I hope I've got that right, and that Brendan orchestrated the whole thing to connect Ian and Diana. Hot as FUCK when they were fucking her together. Total fantasy of mine.

Easily the best writing on this site. God I'm trembling. This trio is beyond my best fantasy. I equally like both Brendan and Ian but Ian's quiet vulnerability tugs at my heartstrings.

This is definitely one of the best written story series on the site.I love the different characteristics of Ian and Brendan, Ians feelings for her are so well drafted I cannot wait to see him admit them to her. The sex is well detailed it feels almost real. Please keep writing.

I love it when a story pulls me in and I'm completely immersed. I love everything about this story the protagonist, characters, dialogue, scenes. I'm not sure yet if I want Di to end up with Ian or all of three stay together....they're just all too sexy!

Skillful writing and intuitive storytelling combine to take a sexy hot story idea to the best level. Not a dry panty in the house after reading this!

This story is amazing. Pleeeease hurry and post chapter 6!! I'm dying for it over here!

wow.

Absolutely love this series and can't wait to find out how the second part of the graduation gift goes. In addition to being hot as hell, this is really well written - sexy and intimate. And the character development is spot on - I care about what happens to all of them. Though I too, am Team Ian all the way :) Keep up the great work!

Seriously cant wait for the next part of the story!! You are brilliant!

Seriously awesome! In all the time I've been reading here, I think this is the first that I couldn't figure out if the plot or steam drew me more to a story! Please keep submitting! I need yo know what happens next!

Wouldnt mind if you'd venture to romance to write about Di and Ian lol

I'm absolutely loving the fact that she wanted Ian there too, im shipping them so hard

Back because I'm pretty sure that's what you're doing to us.

Someone tell Santa how nice we've all been this year!

omg please post the next part!!!! can't deal with waiting so long

It felt incomplete without him. Yes! Yes! And more yes! Love the nuances of there relationship. Would love to see them end up together.

Thanks for all your wonderful comments, everyone! I'm enjoying your thoughts on the ins and out of the story. And yes -- the long wait for chapter 6 is really an elaborate tease designed to drive you all crazy. At least, that sounds better than family, work, and scenes that require a lot of...coordination. There's more to come, I promise.

I love these stories and these charactors. I read ch. 5 first and then had to go back and find the rest. These stories make me wish for a book in the best way, just for more backstory. Ill be looking for ch. 6!

Go Team Ian!! I feel like Brendan is just in this for sexy fun and maybe to be his brother's wingman. Meanwhile Ian is adorably, awkwardly smitten. I really hope that Ian and Diana end up together... and Brendan can join in when he's between girlfriends. ;)

This is one of the best stories on this site. Bravo.

This story is so fucking hot. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Nicely done, can't wait for the next installment.... And the next.......

This wait is killing me! Please don't keep it for too much longer

Love your story, hoping theres more to come. This would be a great story to write as a book. Please keep writing =)

After reading the previous chapters, I thought that maybe, sometime, there would be a double-penetration threesome. Didn't expect it now, and certainly am most pleasantly surprised by how hot it was. Looked like this chapter was going to be just Brendan, but he seemed to nudge Diana into asking for Ian - the butt plug must have done it! And then Ian wanted her butt so badly, but forced himself to be patient and take it slowly, so he wouldn't hurt Diana. Such consideration, from the so-called bad boy! Love this!

luv2read2

I really love the development of the relationship between Ian and Diana. The sex is even better so well written. I'd hoped for DP scene and here it arrived. thank you

I can barely express how absolutely perfect I find your work to be. You're not just fantastic at erotic literature, you're a genuinely good writer. Your characters are so engaging and it makes every moment of the story even better. Diana as a character speaks so much to me and I'm sure to a lot of readers. Her vulnerability and growth is just amazing. I'm so glad you do what you do, and I can't wait to see what you write next.

I felt like Diane totaly submerged by your word and thoughts, my mind had little choice butt to absorb all that you put forth ! Laying it on To thick, well I really enjoyed Di's total absorption of Brandon and Ian. Am I mistaken Ian seems to be the more dominant brother here.

Mom's have this sixth sense how did the vibe cumming out of that room not wake her, and would she want to be next.

I don't normally comment and I feel bad for leaving it so long but these stories are so well developed and written that the sex is amazing but the characters kept bringing me back. The light and shade between the gorgeous and complicated Ian and Brendan and the slightly naive but hidden temptress in Diana. You are genuinely a really good writer and I hope you don't just limit yourself to lit... Even though in my own interests I can wait to see what you come up with next. Thanks for the... erm.. ride

This story is so good with incredible detail! This story is so hot I have to stroke my hard cock as I read every intimate detail as if I was there. Your writing is very good! Keep writing! I really like the way you write!

Best series I have found on this site...... stellar writing!

Holy shit!!! You gotta love both guys, but Ian totally does it for me. Damn! This was so fucking hot! Excuse me while I ummm go check on something in my bedside drawer...

I don’t even know how many times I have read this series. It’s just so damn hot! I need an Ian in my life.

Sweet Jesus why can't twins like this really exist??? I need me some of them,

This was an explosion of awesome storytelling. Effing brilliant!

Your writing is just beautiful. I’ve never liked the idea of three in a bed, and I must admit that my favourite story of yours is still Ian visiting Diana alone, but you make it so beautifully erotic. You write with an amazing patience, unravelling the tension at the most perfect pace. Wonderfully done.

I've been hoping they'd get here since I started reading. Delicious.

You write so well it hurts!

I don't think I've read anything hotter in my life. Off to Amazon...

I usually only mark the first chapter of a story as favourite, but this one just made to the list as well.

This story has captivated me from the begining. I can't get enough. Exquisite writing.