All Comments on 'The Bramble and the Eel'

But having missing words made it hard to read.

I read through it again and I couldn't find any missing words : / I wonder if something went wrong with the submission for some people or I really am the problem.

The only missing word I found was near the beginning when he was frisking her. The "my" was not in front of hands. Later, when she was sucking her lips a right seal about his cock head instead of a tight seal. Otherwise, your story read bueatifully. Very nice. Thank you.

Thank you for pointing them out! The hands one was deliberate but I can totally see how that can read poorly. You're exactly right about the "right seal" I can't believe I missed that!

The human brain on most intelligent, well read folks will insert small missing words on its own without you even breaking a sweat. The story kicked ass! AWESOME!