All Comments on 'The Break-in Ch. 02'

that is not supported by the bid will certainly lower teh profit margin.

you had a good story going then you dropped it it's been almost two years so i don't think you will ever continue but if you do it would be interesting if he found out she was his daughter try to stop being so lazy and finish what you start

Thanks for nothing!!!!!!!!

another writer that starts a story but never finishes it show some pride in your work and respect for the readers and finish what you start or don't post it at all what a waste of time

I thought you said the next one was coming soon?It's been quite a while.

uh we have been waiting for an update plus i failed to see any incest or taboo in the story.

This site is littered with stories like this.... good and unfinished. What the fuck, author?

needs more chapters..

A nothing story about nothing in particular, so no stars, because there's no story...

It was a good story and I hope to see more of it

Please finish this story too good a start not to finish

NEED TO FINISH SO WE KNOW WHAT HAPPENED....

starting to get interesting between him and angel

Did they get the bid? Is there a relationship? Is she a 2nd daughter of the long lost girlfriend? Does she know of, or is she a 1/2 sister to his long lost daughter? Age timeline would make her right, if his daughter would be about 21, and Angel is 18, and Mom died when she was 10.

It really annoys me when people insult an author for not continuing a story. The readers know nothing of what is happening in the writer’s personal life. For all we know, the author could have passed away. In any case, the writers on this site do not owe the readers a thing. Although I am curious as to what may have happened next in the story, I enjoyed what I read & was entertained. Thank you.

The chance of him being her dad and her breaking into his place by sheer luck is too astronomical.