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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

You really should start Proof Reading!!

Example - "Neither his face nor his body look nothing like the age he's given me."

Another example - "I exhale in relief my mouth meets him again and slowly creep forwards until the base of his pelvis is flush against my nose."

Venusinaphrodite_Venusinaphrodite_over 2 years agoAuthor

I actually do but thank you for taking the time to point those out to me! I'll be extra diligent in the future.

naughtyandy4unaughtyandy4uover 2 years ago

A mechanics dream, long time ago I worked as a mechanic and I remember one very cute gal who came in. She was flirty and I would have loved to have taken her for a test drive. I had forgotten until I read this, ah memories.

Venusinaphrodite_Venusinaphrodite_over 2 years agoAuthor

Naughtyand4u I see why you have your name then, it's definitely fitting 👀 lol

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