All Comments on 'The Breaking of Nikki Kim'

Please do a continuation where she fucks the other sons baseball coach

can't wait for part 2

Quit reading, there is a huge difference between being arrogant and an asshole.

Finally, a story worth the read! An insightful look at the effects on a mature woman that fucking a huge cock can have. It would be interesting to read a continuation, set a few months after this present story, showing how Niki has been transformed into a voracious nymphomaniac who can only be satisfied by her new boyfriend's oversized equipment....especially if she is now pregnant!

Believable, very good character and plot development, and really arousing. A sequel please.

best story (i) HAVE READ IN ALONG LONG TIME !

my creative if I may ... sexy dear LOLA, you have me thinking what other talents you hold deep in your mind, behind your naughty penmanship ...?

I love this well thought out story, it just hits all the right spots. Thank You for being and doing what You do

Please, take us there again soon with all your writing curves ...

I am all yours as far as your Mind can take me

- Alx

Love to read more in how Mrs. KIM, brings out 'Nikki'.

Can I give an idea for next story?

Five Stars!

I hope for more hot stories with different monster cocks. Ms. Kim becomes Nikki, a cock loving slut.

Erotic, hot, exciting and even realistic.

Her inner turmoil was very good to read.

Please continue!

This is one of the best stories I've read in a long time. I hope there is a part 2 or similar stories in the near future

Maybe in part 2 have her confess to her husband but it ends up with him being the one who set it up with Johan to seduce her because he has a kink for wmaf porn. If her husband is left out have her confess to her sister and her sister sets her up with some white guys.

Loved your story. Please continue with a part 2 if possible. Would love to hear whats in store next for Nikki

Amazing story. More of Nikki Kim please!

Outstanding story. I love Korean women— read my stories about them. Korean women outwardly seem aloof but when you unlock them they are lionesses that love their lion to take them

What a story girl! Fantastic

I hope you do a part 2 to this because it really is something else in how good it is.

This will go down in the books for literotica.

Amazing story! Please continue with Mrs. Kim's/Nikki's cheating ways. I prefer her to be a cheating wife, but that decision is ultimately up to you. Her husband should not know that she is slowly becoming a slut. More white guys with big cocks please.

I’ve sent you a dm ;)

Idea for sequel -- husband or son catches them and decides to watch as voyeur.

This is good. Shame we missed dinner after the final tournament before the flight home where Nikki could be more free. There’s still a prize not yet opened.

The best story I've read on here in a while. You have to continue the story!

The first story of yours that I've read and will be reading more after this. I look forward to reading more about Nikki's new discoveries about herself.

Damn, what a story. Please portray steve as a cuckold and continue the story

Amazing, again, you're a fantastic writer. I would love for this story to continue, and for it to get darker.

please continue this!! need more slutty asian mommy stories!!!

Please don't write another cuckold story! There are already too many of them. Mrs. Kim, a devouted wife should be a cheating wife.

I'm not a fan of Nikki being coerced into sex by him using her son. Feels way to rapey. I am a fan of her turning into a slut though. I'd love to see her slowly turn sluttier and her husband enjoying the transformation.

It truly is extremely well written and great creativity and story telling. I’m a cuck myself and have a hotwife who plays once in a while. And like the husband in this story, am small in the cock department and get turned on to see my wife land a big one! Keep the story going!

Next for Nikki is becoming a bad wife and mother all because of some big BLACK cock.

Wow... Thanks to all of you for reading and commenting. I love knowing that there are strangers out there getting off on the stuff I've written, and it turns me on to hear which parts you liked best. And since I'm nothing if not an approval-seeking slut, I'm pleased to say that your feedback will be rewarded with a follow-up story.

It should publish in the next couple of days, but I hope you can't wait that long. I hope you stay up too late, re-reading all of my old stories, desperately refreshing my bio page every few minutes.

I hope the anticipation kills you. Cause it's killing me.

Love your writing style!

Well written, but a little unrealistic. Good plot and characters. The intensity of Johoan's approach is excellent, although rape is rape no matter how much the rapee enjoyed it and may be transformed by the long sex act.

this is transcendant! Bravo!!!

This story could define the category, Lola. It's not rape, but close enough to get the prudes bitching and the hopeful dads daydreaming. As always, appreciate the slow buildup and character development. We may not like Johan, but he's believable as a brash young man with a large gift. Nikki is the quintessential MILF, just waiting for her fuse to be lit! Well done.

~B

that was a hot one.... like the theme with a submissive asian milf and a straight "dominator" . the sexual fight between both and the winner .... well written, excitin 2 read AND pls. do more of that "hot stuff"

waitin 4 it ....

oh my god amazing

"purely fictional"? Clearly based on Feliks Zemdegs and Max Park.

Wow! A fraction of 1 percent of stories here are “literature.” This is one of them. Mrs. Kim’s experience and paradigm shift are compelling. You have looked into a person’s essence with understanding and empathy. She is not a cardboard character and neither is Johan. The tension between her basic instinct to care for her child and the consequences of what she feels she has to do are beautifully articulated. The ending is also excellent. She is not going to run around chasing white cock like a demented nymphomaniac, but her vision of herself is changed. The reader is left to speculate about the next chapter in her life. She is intelligent, moral, caring and self-aware. We hope that she can work out the tensions she now harbors with her husband and her sexual being. An artistic story gives the reader material to justify the character’s actions. This story does that in spades. We can think back on the events and see that they are congruent with Nikki’s essence. “Literature” shows change. It brings us empathy as we see that change and have respect and understanding. Thank you!

Super hot first chapter. Nikki awakening is great. Jonah a great antagonist. Well written intimate scenes. Cannot wait until he completely gets her.

Always

Always love a story where an asian woman gets taken hard, not sure if you were projecting your own desires. ;)

Also love how aggressive and manipulative Johan is.

I almost missed this amazing story, since usually I do not check this category. In fact, it would have played well in nc, also, but looking forward to reading the next chapter.

Excellent writing. Very good enjoyable story.

Great story. So nice to see Nikki humiliated and taken roughly.

A great story with a long-drawn-out plot. Nikki's internal dialogue made the story, as she finally succumbed to Johan's aggressive and rough form of seduction, and it was Nikki's ultimate sacrifice for her autistic son. The fact that she was reluctant but then surrendered by enjoying Johan's size and superior loving-making skills. Probably forever changing her life as an MILF. The writing was intense, emotional, and believable which made for a sex scene far above average. There are few stories on this site that are as good as this one

Excellente histoire, dans laquelle l'aspect psychologique et l'aspect sexuel sont très bien développés.

Un talent indéniable; merci