All Comments on 'The Breaking Point'

really good start ... will be waiting for more..

Cole threw his elbow into the older mans larynx and killed him where he stood. End to stupid, implausible story.

The poor grammar ruins the flow of the story. It's like reading a bad essay from a middle school student.

Please continue your story, I quite like it.

Oh my, yes, make the sweet young boy a real sub, just for me. Continue the story and tell what happens to his mouth and rectum! Cole. What a darling name. I've

taken 11 inches down my throat; how much can Cole take, I wonder? Gay sex is just s-o-o-o-o-o yummy. Yes it is!