by MarshalMarmont1815
A waste of time & effort. It seems that good stories seem to come in groups. I keep waiting...searching...
I'm surprised it made it through. The continuity issues are terrible. Please run it through an editor next time.
Do not let anyone get to you! The bigger the better! Some the best parts are imaging seeing the huge beautiful boobs! Great job but yes you need an editor.
The sex is great; the tits are great. The continuity is sloppy. And when did you describe the breeding program? Not in Ch. 1, I know. It really deserves to be described.
It could easily be a five with a little care. I should give it a three, but it gets a four because it makes me horny.
Great Story I will read all of your stories, Keep up the good work. I love Breasts too. The bigger the better with large areolas like Suzy Sparks