All Comments on 'The BrewPub'

love the story please continue in this thread

Interesting..... need the next chapter.... Liked it

It almost worked. I'll keep an eye out for your next one.

Don’t quit your day job.

Turning off ratings is a turn off of more than ratings. It means we have to actually tell you it sticks instead of just hittng that 1 star button.

Was there a story in this brewing recipe?

Meh. There was nothing even remotely erotic about this one. Not really even a lead up. Nicely written though and pure dialog is hard to pull off. But I'd still only give it a 1/5.

Like it a lot! Could have been longer though. I want to see more. 5⭐

I agree with cageysea9725 - I am telling you it sucketh.

Did u jus wanna share a beer recipe? Should a put this under nonerotic 0 stars if I could rate it

Kinda interesting start bur nowhere near enough for it to be a full chapter.