by AspernEssling
What the hell is this crap:
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I don't think I've ever seen this in literature before.
The story line? Poor and slow.
This isn't a chapter, it's a prelude to lousy writing.
Just discovered your stories and I'm hooked. I like your writing and see lots of possibilities with the characters.
Another good building chapter. Looking forward to reading more. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.