All Comments on 'The Bridge Club Ch. 04'

Really enjoying this story so far! Keep it coming! I am particularly pleased at the apparent lack of spelling and grammatical errors that allows me to focus on and enjoy the story instead of getting frustratingly distracted by errors. Well done!

Loving the first four chapters, and with you posting new ones daily them being short isn't a problem.

Keep up the good work.

Well planned. After the last chapter I was thinking 'complications with Carmen' - and in this chapter you dealt with it. Bodes well for whatever comes next.

Nice story thus far, but....... These ladies for the most part are intelligent and they communicate. Seems pretty likely that they will figure something out as the bulls move around the herd. Still, that might prove an advantage to Normie, as he is the nice guy in the competition.

Great! Much better ending and the plot and writing are still great.

Always leave them feeling like it was their decision to break it off, especially if they leave it open to FWB! Another well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading the next. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.