All Comments on 'The Bridge Club Ch. 05'

I'm not sure what I'm expecting .. perhaps only a more conventional story. But this interplay between the two male protagonists by way of the women, is an interesting way of telling the story.

I had only one cringe moment, when squirting made its appearance. I swear, this must be the new internet fad. A year or so ago you would rarely see any mention of it. And now squirting is taking on the status of connoisseur eroticism.

I would gladly forfeit the bet just to have Abigal......I love it when a woman squirts !

Love the writing. The tongue in cheek humour is wonderful.

Abigail needed the love and attention.

“Well, one can play that game” really gave me a chuckle!

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It's nice for a man to go out of his way to find out what makes a girl happy. Another well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading the next. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.