All Comments on 'The Broussard Sisters Ch. 05'

This story just gets better and better. That Paul's a lucky guy. Feel bad for Elaine, poor girl. Bad home life and now beat up by that fucked up Bill. He needs to spend some time in jail getting his ass reamed out be some really big gang members. Maybe Marie can help put him there or help him get fucked if nothing else.

Not a bad story, but it is getting hard to keep track of all the different characters especially with the time between posts.

All the story lines are fun. Can't wait to see what's gonna happen with all the characters. I'm hoping for another update soon.

Loving the different threads of this story, it's clever and gripping. Bummed about the number of typos that are distracting though. Cheers

It is a challenge keeping track of all the characters, I've never been very good at that when there are a lot. I keep thinking 'who were they again and how do they fit in?' Hehe. But I love the quick shift from one set of people to the next, keeps it interesting. Hoping someome takes a baseball bat to that dickheads balls and then his head for hurting the girl, then gets to go be a prison bitch. Just not sure who I hope beats the fuck out of him first. If she didnt have broken fingers I'd hope it was her doing it.

Surprised our main character has managed as well as he has so far with his obvious premature problem, lol.

...wait... Did pam not lose her virginity tonight? Did I miss something

The version of this chapter posted in the Literotica app is truncated (just before Chapter 42)

I wish these story in between stories weren't here...they should have their own title and series