by byronbayer
Follows on nicely from first chapter. Maybe a bit brief but I enjoyed it.
Karl (byronbayer) has past away after a very short illness.
A great friend. Farewell
Misha
Sorry to hear of Byronbayers passing. really enjoyed the two parts of the story that he was able to complete. Need someone to continue story.
My girl friend and I love it we are going to look for our own Katy and Karl.
As for part one. Great story. Love the use of words that describe Katie moving from the darkness to the light. Sadly with Byronbayer's passing we will not get to read the continuing story as I would love to read of the future exploits of the girls and their husbands.
Christabelle
The word is getting around how good this story is. We as a group are disapointed that there isn't to be any more follow ups but we have started discussing what was going to happen in chapter three and we act out our theories each of us with a role as a character in the story. Great fun
Loved the first chapter. Katie has certainly started to blossom. Would love to have been able to read more of this lovely womans life.
While only short, the second chapter gives further body to the story and is also gets one's juices flowing. Pity there is no chapter 3 and more.
While only short, the second chapter gives further body to the story and is also gets one's juices flowing. Pity there is no chapter 3 and more.
As said before one of the better written stories found on this site. While it has a few blemishes it has good structure a is an enjoyable read.
Probus Litoria
Probus Litoria who ever the fuck they are,would have to be a school teacher thinking they are marking some kids essay. This is a great story to jerk off to and my wife got juiced up too. What blemishes are there in the story.
ProbusCuntus and LikumDikum
This is an excellent story I fantasized about my own participation. Erin
Sensational story pity it will never be completed