by murphy621
Conquer female with power! Jake no put up with stupid female! Jake win!!!
All bow to the mighty Jake!
Another story that doesn't make my 2/3 cut. This is about another cheating whore.
Murphy, all your stories suck, and I am in the process of going through and rating them all 1 star. This is because of the abomination you called, "The Black Velcro Choker". That story was so bad, in addition to rating ALL your stories 1 star, I have made a list of all the identified commenters for it, and if any commenter has written ANY story, I am rating everyone of their stories 1 star as well!!
But this story really sucks in English language writing skills. So I had to stop and make a comment!
LEARN THE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN THE CONTRACTION FOR "YOU ARE", AND THE SECOND PERSON POSSESSIVE PRONOUN, "YOUR"!!!!!!
Next, the protaganist is allegedly a "General Contractor" making million dollar houses, and he doesn't know the difference between a load BEARING wall, and becoming naked--"baring" all. This idiot cant't build houses!!!!!!!
And you can't write!!!
You would have to be a giant fuckup to extend the building of a house that long. Not to mention that the permit would have expired in that time frame. What did you do? Nail your finger to a board? This was just stupid.
Married women are to be fucked by their husbands only. If they fuck anyone else, the story should continue until at least one head rolls.