All Comments on 'The Bus'

Absolutely adored this story! I hope you write another longer one!

Very creative. Don't stop now. I'll definitely use your ideas in my writing.

Read this on the bus, so hot :)

Please note! That was so hot!!!

Hello from Greece! An interesting story! A sensual story. Howevr, in real setting, unprotected sex can lead to unwanted pregnancy and sexual transmietted diseases. I had a such real experience. It was awful! Please, sex is nice, but with caring both for yourself and the other person/s.

Great story. Clearly that anon didn't read the tags, otherwise they'd understand what this story was going to be lol.

I wish this would happen to me on a bus. I'd ride more often.

Unprotected sex with strangers is definitely NOT something I advocate, but in a fictional world theres no harm, plus it can slow the pace of the writing down!! But i appreciate the feedback all the same. Thank you other commenters for your kind words, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Oh I loved the end! Great story!