All Comments on 'The Bush Publican'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Thanks!

Alan

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Goodonya

Nice to see a well written yarn in an Aussie context

Sid0604Sid0604about 10 years ago
A great story...

I loved it. It's good to read a story written in proper English for a change. Easily worth 5 stars.

abboncabboncabout 10 years ago
Another masterpiece!

As a former resident of the area (Leigh Creek, mid 70s), I feel qualified to say that you have absolutely nailed it with your fictional township. It has me thinking of a cross between Beltana and Parachilna (as they were then).

One very small gripe - it's "flare", but at least you were consistent!

Nick

curioussscuriousssabout 10 years ago
A delightful...

...love story, with great humour and descriptive talents.

As someone else said, I'm sure it's also a realistic slice of life in that kind of area.

Thanks and a deserved 5.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Very enjoyable story

Like I said - Very enjoyable story - but I would not expect any less from you.

Looking forward to your further contributions.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Good on yer mate!!

Thanks for a really good read . . I really liked the humour between Bert an Dave you made the place come alive . . Its always nice to have a happy ending

Dave seemed to have a lot of hidden talents Im thinking if there was a page 5 he might have let slip a retired secret agent!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

I really enjoyed this story. I liked that it was about an area that is less travelled and not in the city. Another chapter would be great and i thought maybe she was pregnant when she was feeling down. Not that that would be a bad thing.

5***

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Bloody Good

really enjoyed the story but enjoyed the glossary as much and so educational for a poor pom !!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Really bonza story

Great to read about the beauty of the 'bush' and the characters that live there. Nice to read about 'home' from the other side of the world

mick1953mick1953about 10 years ago
!!!

I have been reading your stories for years, but this is far and away the best that you have written! Thanks for sharing it with us.

bruce22bruce22about 10 years ago
As always CM hits the spot

The characters are great and the storyline interesting with lots of moments.

david2908david2908about 10 years ago
wonderful read

Thoroughly enjoyed the colorful characters and unique landscape of earth's oldest continent.

chytownchytownabout 10 years ago
Great Read*****

Thanks for sharing. I feel like I have been on vacation.

MitchFraellMitchFraellabout 10 years ago
Great story telling

I enjoyed this one. Thanks

pope32767pope32767about 10 years ago
A beautiful demonstration ...

.... of how two members of a nation of deadpan snarkers actually do manage to fall in love.

Sidney43Sidney43about 10 years ago

Another great story from down under. Sometimes I can almost figure out what is being talked about. But no matter, it is always entertaining.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Bush or Outback??

Great story. It's good to see /read from an author from Oz. It seems as if the story may well have been set in the outback, rather than the bush...

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
WONDERFUYL WITTY STORY

love how you paint pictures of the scenery...can just see it as my sister has traveled extensively around Oz......full of fun and humour too ...love the repartee between them all....

cybojicybojiover 4 years ago
Great story

Appreciate the glossary at the back. Love the language. Great work as always. 5

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Nicely done

Very Amusing and bloody well-written.

Thank You

HP

Diecast1Diecast1over 2 years ago

Great story. Love it. AAAAAA++++++

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