by marshallrinkes
This is a great start to what could be a long series. Keep writing! Can't wait for next instalment.
If you can't get a buddy to proof it, look for an editor. You did very well, but there were a few times when the word was wrong for the sentence. Like all good readers, I mentally filled in the right one and kept on. Love the story so far, good build up and hot sex potential to continue with the assistant. Keep it up!
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