All Comments on 'The Business Agreement'

by marshallrinkes

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SamWarrensSamWarrensover 7 years ago
great start

This is a great start to what could be a long series. Keep writing! Can't wait for next instalment.

rnebularrnebularover 7 years ago
Great start but may I suggest am editor

If you can't get a buddy to proof it, look for an editor. You did very well, but there were a few times when the word was wrong for the sentence. Like all good readers, I mentally filled in the right one and kept on. Love the story so far, good build up and hot sex potential to continue with the assistant. Keep it up!

Rnebular

hard1herehard1hereover 7 years ago
Very hot

So fucking hot baby. You made me cum so hard! Thank you!

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