All Comments on 'The Business Trip'

So how did the rest of the trip go

drug - pharmaceutical, legal or otherwise

dragged - past tense of the verb "to drag"

"the meeting drug on" ?? Only at Bayer.

I gave up at that point, mainly because the plot was too far-fetched. Better luck next time.

this was a great story, I like how it starts slow, and then builds up, the tension, and then the release! I hope you keep writing about these two co-workers.

More please!

but it feels unfinished.

...should just stop. You are not one of those, you're the other kind. Please continue!

Please finish the story!

I don’t think they’ve gone far enough

I see an opening. Might be time to give it a shot.

Maybe the next night will lead to mutual masturbation. The a blow job while driving home.

T R O U B L E "(!)"

Great story

Please keep going! Despite what some others said about typos and brevity, with a little editing and some plot rearrangement, you have a great storyline here.

Great erotic story. I'll bet tomorrow night they'll be in the one room watching each other. Super build-up. Oh for a colleague like Becca....ha ha

Great story, I am jealous, I get decent scores but not this many comments. Ignore the trolls that are only out to criticise others, its because they have no creativity themselves. I like this type of story, it allows people to use their own imagination. I will give you a tip as an author however, that might help save time in proofing. I have started using text to speech to listen to what I wrote, it's a great proofing tool. I am from the printing industry, we used to suggest people read copy backwards for mistakes, but that was before PCs, and artificial intelligence. I also have grammar and spelling in addition to the text to speech add-on on my Chrome browser to help with proofing my final drafts. They are free and help immensely, and are also time savers.

Really enjoyed that story, fine job. Please write more!

Read this and the second part. Not that far-fetched... Looking forward to reading more!

There is something beautiful and deeply troubling about this story. What happens when friends push at the line of their friendship? Or the line gets blurred?

Masterful. Intruiging. Suspenseful. Can't wait for chapter 02!

Nice, long, slow, detailed buildup.

Looking forward to next chapter/s.

Five stars.

that was perfect! Great job!