All Comments on 'The Busty Babysitter'

I liked your story very much. You could have had Rachel explain herself to John a bit more (IE: emotions, motivation, etc) and the ending felt very rushed. Still a very, very good story.

i hope there is a part 2 and the sister joins in

great story, too bad that it didn't get to titfuck the busty baby sitter; maybe next time

This was a great story. The pacing and atmosphere had you feeling like you were experiencing life as John. Even guys who just let life happen to them deserve to have one or two fantasies come true. Unlike a previous commenter I think one of the best parts was the believability. Once you accept that this is the one in X million guy whose babysitter actually falls for him, each of the characters behaves in a realistic and human way, even to the point of me wanting to warn John about that dominating streak in his new lover.

Great job, sethp.

One of your best efforts, seth, I really loved it! Keep up with the fantastic story-telling; you get better and better!

i wish john was my husband

Fun read though . That husband is such a puppet ! Well we get the love & the government we deserve . Hope his 18 yr old trophy puppet mistress treats him sweet for awhile. Thx to author for reality break .

Well done.

Look forward to the next.

please write more!

Liked the story a lot...was really hot! One suggestion though, from a technical perspective. You seem to have a thing where certain phrases "repeat" throughout. For instance, early on, one phrase was "he was resigned to his fate". You say that several times at different points. There were a few other phrases that repeated in similar fashion. Just be mindful of that.

But, overall, great job!

Absolutely fucking great

I have never, ever found a story that was PERFECT,

but that is the only way to describe this story!!!

Sethp! That was one of the fucking hottest stories ever! Loved it! You rock!