All Comments on 'The Butterfly with a Broken Wing Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I’m enjoying this! Hope to see more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Well, I am liking the story but would like more instead of just one page. I kind of like the character development. So far, X has not hurt her, except for the ankle. I wonder what the story is behind the robbery. Wonder what drug he gave her. Will she be hurt later? Will she get out alive, or without too much trauma? Please update a bit quicker and with longer chapters.

ProperTeaProperTeaover 1 year ago

Like someone else said, having more than a single page would be nice, but the story so far is good. Please continue.

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