All Comments on 'The Cabin'

Wow, just wow. Your descriptions and storytelling and way to make it all fit perfectly and unwrap so smoothly... wauw

A lovely story! So well written and lots of yummy parts too. Thank you!

Good story.

Great finish.

Thanks.

Great Story and excellent imagination and writing!

Thanks

Wonderful story although I almost stopped when the wood stove took 10 loads for the day. Living in Alaska and heating with wood, 1 armload in the morning and one at night is the most it took in the worst weather. His was the most inefficient stove I ever heard of.I am very glad I kept going and I thoroughly enjoyed the story.

What a great tale of a man who was so down he wanted to end it all only to be saved by a guardian angel and his sister. The twist at the end where he came face to face with Samantha who he could see in her eyes that Julie her was her guardian angel. I would have been interesting to have an epilogue of where Bill and Samantha found love and a happily ever after and that would have been a fitting end. Well done 5++stars

Really nice story. Please start writing here again, or tell us where we can read your newer stories

Fantastic read. Thank you for taking the time to write and share it.

I can't read your œuvre any longer. It hurts too much for where I am in my life today. You're such a fantastic storyteller.

This was an awesome story!!!

For reasons I can't explain,it made me cry as she unveiled herself as an angel!

Another masterpiece! I’m on the 7th story in your repertoire and haven’t been disappointed yet! PHENOMENAL work!

Nice twist at the end. I had not seen that one coming. Good job.

Amazing! Thank you.

beautiful!

Another great tale from a master story weaver. Hope there are more of them to be found LP

Outstanding!! And thank you for shari ng.

So so good, on the off chance you should ever check these comments DreamCloud, please know you’re missed, I know why you aren’t here any more, but we the readers miss your story weaving. Thank you for what’s still here. Cheers Ppfzz.

interesting... however, "author" cannot tell the difference between the verbs 'to lie' and 'to lay'; nor between the verb ''to breathe" and the noun "breath". ALL major middle school errors.

good ending with the Angel and Samantha.

This is one of my favourites!!

I feel kinda bad for those who seem to be unable to lose themselves in a story, finding the need to nitpick errors.

I have never been disappointed by any of your stories.

Sweet story. I really enjoyed the surprise at the end.

Absolutely fantastic!!! Thank you...

I loved this. While I agree with the cowardly anonymous critic about breath & breathe, which are pet peeves of my own, I thought the story was truly wonderful. I've gotten used to breath/breathe errors to the point that I'm surprised when someone actually gets them correct. Taut/taught/taunt still bugs me a lot, though. And when did the people of America forget how to spell "loser"? OI!

Most plans we create falling apart and life is teaching us the proper direction ....... Freezing to death, sounds not so comfy until sleep claims your body for eternity ...... May not much difference with bleeding to death ....... But sometimes angels rescue appears or just the lifetime play isn't done yet ....... Lovely written, thinking he is a hero and turning him into different shade of light

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I enjoyed the story very much. It was entertaining, erotic and surprising. Well done.

Five stars for this story. I always feel happier after reading any of your stories.

Than you.

Jeff Troyer

Just read this one for the first time. I loved how there was a lot that was unsaid in this story, but enough was given that our imaginations could fill the gap.

I was a little perturbed in the ending, I wanted to see more on the connection with Sam, but again, imagination can fill that gap.

Thank you for writing this one

This story never fails to bring a tear and a smile.

EXCELLENT !

THANK YOU ! !

Great story. I just wish it had a longer ending.

Also you have a nasty habit of making me cry when I read your stories. I hope you feel proud of yourself…⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Better on the second read.

Very beautiful & a wonderful read. It says many things which have not been said. It's a too good story

Soooo, good! Even better on 2nd, 3rd, 4th, read... needs Epilogue or more!

I had thoughts of an angel mid way through, but wasn’t sure. There were enough hints so as not to make an ‘then a miracle occurred & straightens out everything’ moment which ruined everything. It just seemed as though everything made sense. A good 5 star tale.

Bill S.

Loved it! I’m a sucker for stories like this.

You are so absolutely talented. I love your stories.

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Once again I have been attacked by invisible Ninjas dicing onions!

11/10!!!!!

Very well told.

Another great story, albeit involving guardian angels

One thing is that I would have assumed any cabin would have a stove and not depend on a fireplace. Stoves were common in 18th century.

Not one of author's best because it is a total fable, unlike The rehab or the Promise or some of author's other great works.

A really nice tale with an interesting twist BardnotBard

AGAIN, A GREAT CREATION !

THANK YOU !

This was a really fun story. The comment that mentioned that even a primitive cabin should have a wood burning stove was correct. Fur trappers may not have all had stoves, but this is a cabin that was for rent, to not only survival experts. Also I suspect there would be some sort legal requirement for some sort of emergency beacon or flare for a licensed rentable hunting cabin. Even if there was not, a responsible owner would provide something. Still, overall it was a really good story.

*wow*

very powerful.

Utterly readable sublimely.

Also skillfully blends three distinct strands of life into one.

Thank you.

OMG! SO wicket ! Thanx!

Excellent moving short story.

Excellent! Second time reading this & it’s still surperb.

5stars again.

Bill S.