All Comments on 'The Cabin - A Sexy Snowy Wonderland'

Perfect! A dream, though being a male I'm with you totally!

Loved this story! So hot, love the lesbian action with the hot cousin, I would like to think you stories are true, if not, you have a sexy AF imagination!

Please write more, this was great

You were going great until the pee part - douchebag!

Literotica needs to hurry up and revise its layout so story tags are listed upfront. The number of times I've dropped a read half-way when it suddenly veers into hardcore fetish is more than it should be.

Up until the watersports it wasn't bad, though the writing's a bit too mechanical and Bre's over-eager commentary undermines a suspenseful buildup.

I enjoyed your tail of the sexy cousins. It was very arousing! Well done. Disregard the asshats that are put off by watersports. Maybe place a content disclaimer at the beginning for the weak minded. Thanks for sharing.

Two amazing cousins who are not afraid to be uninhibited. Masterfully crafted and can go on forever.

Great story!

You did a great job of story telling in that oh so sexy tale. I loved your characters and their journey of discovery. You have a great imagination and a lovely way with words. At least Mr Douchebag signed his Anonymous comment. :)

I loved it. Everything about it. The incest, ass to mouth, pee play, pee drinking - everything was great. Please write more

This hit all the buttons for me. Please write more like it!

Not my thing and would have been best left out.

I once tried it with my brother before my marriage... We dank each other

one of the best stories I have read on this site :)

This was super hot! Ignore the simpletons bitxhing about the pee play. That was hot! Though, perhaps a description could include watersports, so that those simpletons don't fuck upbthe comments. Lovely story.

As a guy, it’s usually difficult to get into female pov’s but something about your writing made it very hot for me. We’ll done!

This would have been a five star effort if you hadn't gone so deep into the piss play. The golden showers and sucking fingers fresh from the ass totally ruined it for me. I stopped reading this garbage after Alyson swallowed Bre's piss. 😤 1/5

Next time, put a trigger warning in the first few sentences BEFORE you start the story.

I know the intro more or less closed the opportunity for a follow up, but it would have been nice to read more about Alyson and Bre again. 5/5