by wyo66
The most wonderful and most amazing coming together of two wonderful people. I envy you.
there are only a handful of stories that truly deserve 5 or more stars, and this story was one of them very well written, I just hope the grandfather made it to the bunk house alright, and I hope there is a pt 2 please!!!!!
Gave you 4 stars. One mistake kept nagging me, the direction towards Oregon from Dakotas is west, not east. You've mentioned it as east twice.
This story deserves each of the five stars I have awarded. Well put together, with a beautiful flow about it. As a good story should, it aimed at an explosive climax which, when reached, brought the story to a close that will allow it to either stop or easily flow on to another chapter.
Thank you, WYO66. This story took me away from the mundane and gave me a lift.
A "straight up" story of a ranch romance. Solid story line, appealing cast and nice ending.. Highly recommended.
Great story only thing that really killed it for me was the disrespectful part about First Nations people
Really sweet story!! I'm so glad that that Angel finally found pleasure<3
Enjoyed the story. But, my question is: Just WHO THE FUCK cares which direction the Dakotas are from Oregon? It sure as hell is not material to the story. Anyone who can pull up a map of the US can readily determine that. It is really too bad these nit-pickers are so damned anal retentive that they cant determine what is material to a story and what ain't.
Need to say this SETTING is not the same as SITTING. You need to change from Setting to Sitting
She had a perfect body that was taught in a way. TAUGHT is TO TEACH- I think you mean TAUT
grazing all ready and new Stew. KNEW is the word I think you are looking for. NEW is an item that is new. Know is a past tense word for KNEW.
SMELT is what you would do to Metals. I think the word you are looking for is SMELLED
FYI - just so you know. The program lets me speak of the items I had listed. But it was individually. I can't do this again for EACH infraction of spelling lol It erases every time I go to the pages listed. I can't go to page 1 when on page 3, so I list EACH spelling individually.