All Comments on 'The Cabin on Willow Creek'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Sheer Heaven

The most wonderful and most amazing coming together of two wonderful people. I envy you.

jenorma2012jenorma2012almost 7 years ago
very very good

there are only a handful of stories that truly deserve 5 or more stars, and this story was one of them very well written, I just hope the grandfather made it to the bunk house alright, and I hope there is a pt 2 please!!!!!

TSreaderTSreaderalmost 7 years ago
A very yummy story!

Very yummy indeed! I hope this continues! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Not bad

Gave you 4 stars. One mistake kept nagging me, the direction towards Oregon from Dakotas is west, not east. You've mentioned it as east twice.

OzBushrangerOzBushrangeralmost 7 years ago
Can't beat a good Western

This story deserves each of the five stars I have awarded. Well put together, with a beautiful flow about it. As a good story should, it aimed at an explosive climax which, when reached, brought the story to a close that will allow it to either stop or easily flow on to another chapter.

Thank you, WYO66. This story took me away from the mundane and gave me a lift.

Nr1cowgirlNr1cowgirlalmost 7 years ago
Straight up!

A "straight up" story of a ranch romance. Solid story line, appealing cast and nice ending.. Highly recommended.

Admiralbird348Admiralbird348almost 7 years ago
Wow

Tremendous story!! Great writing too:)

Thank you so much:)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Great story

Great story only thing that really killed it for me was the disrespectful part about First Nations people

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

Really sweet story!! I'm so glad that that Angel finally found pleasure<3

MoMiner64MeteMoMiner64Meteover 4 years ago
Good Story!

Enjoyed the story. But, my question is: Just WHO THE FUCK cares which direction the Dakotas are from Oregon? It sure as hell is not material to the story. Anyone who can pull up a map of the US can readily determine that. It is really too bad these nit-pickers are so damned anal retentive that they cant determine what is material to a story and what ain't.

kbone1kbone17 months ago

Need to say this SETTING is not the same as SITTING. You need to change from Setting to Sitting

kbone1kbone17 months ago

She had a perfect body that was taught in a way. TAUGHT is TO TEACH- I think you mean TAUT

kbone1kbone17 months ago

grazing all ready and new Stew. KNEW is the word I think you are looking for. NEW is an item that is new. Know is a past tense word for KNEW.

kbone1kbone17 months ago

SMELT is what you would do to Metals. I think the word you are looking for is SMELLED

kbone1kbone17 months ago

FYI - just so you know. The program lets me speak of the items I had listed. But it was individually. I can't do this again for EACH infraction of spelling lol It erases every time I go to the pages listed. I can't go to page 1 when on page 3, so I list EACH spelling individually.

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