All Comments on 'The Calling'

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ARIENS SOUL ....

I saw the same glaring error in every single paragraph of this story, and it's something a simple grammar check program would have fixed.

Incomplete thoughts are punctuated by...

It is not to be used as a pause, and the next word is capitalized because it's the beginning of a new sentence.

Not as common, but still an issue, was the spacing. There were several instances in which no space was used between punctuation and the word immediately following it.

The work has brilliant potential, but seeing the same errors repeated over and over again drew me right out of the story. These two issues are usually enough for a story to be rejected, so it's something that should be addressed. Fortunately, there are some wonderful guides under the Writer's Resources link.