All Comments on 'The Calling'

5 stars

There was so much detail and history that I assume you have made the trip yourself. As always I enjoyed your story. Thanks.

, but highly implausible tale, hardly fitting for an erotic writing site. Also, it would have been far better if the author had restrained himself from the political comments made which indicated his extremely flawed understanding of the geopolitical situation. I would suggest sticking to fairy tale romance without the harsh reality of war, oppression, occupation and multi faceted terrorism as a wise career move. Still contains an element of entertainment though.

I feel I understand some of the bible stories better.

The travelogue was interesting, but I felt like skimming allot of it to try and follow the story. The story seemed quite obvious in the eventual but meandering conclusion. But

I love a happy ending and am glad that I read it.

Exceptional. I have been to many of the sites described here, and this story brought back great memories. I even had a minor religious experience at one of these myself. Most of all, Scripture is dealt with accurately and in context. Thank you very much!

ambitious undertaking. Well done. Interesting making him a dim reflection of Christ. One should not take this as orthodox theology but as a fascinating and very original story.

What more can I say.

I really enjoyed this story. The history. The passion. The eroticism. Combined with spirituality was very comforting. Tonight I have been troubled by world developments. I found your story quite soothing. Five stars.