All Comments on 'The Calm Before the Calm'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Keep going

Very hot. Hopefully you bring the family together for some fun.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Another one please

You need to write a family chapter. Since it is in the open. Good story.0

KlitomaticKlitomaticover 4 years ago
Good

Try for some more of the Red Zone.

Harvey_32Harvey_32over 4 years ago
cool

An unexpected twist... or was it?

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Free-lance writer who enjoys reading mostly non-fiction but also Nicholas Sparks romance novels and "serious" lit (John Updike, Irwin Shaw, Philip Roth, Herman Wouk). I enjoy writing these stories because it entertains me as well as the readership. Lit is unique in that wri...