All Comments on 'The Cameltoe'

by zeropatience

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horny2doithorny2doitover 4 years ago

I think the 3 kids should go camping for a few days when the girls are safe and screw each other senseless. They can do their brother good and he can do them. Then see how they all feel afterwards. That would be a good base for more adventure later on.

zeropatiencezeropatienceover 4 years agoAuthor
Author's note: Hanna's boyfriend Jimmy

Jimmy is as young and horny as Hanna. They've been a couple for two years. He was copping a feel. Assault wasn't the theme.

horney47horney47over 4 years ago
Lovely

Your story took a twist that I really didn't expect when it started. If I had been paying attention, I guess it was the only way it could go given who the characters are and the category it is in. Very well written and very erotic. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

@horny2doit: "brother“?

Well written story with a somewhat unusual perspective. Thanks for sharing!

MrBill36MrBill36almost 4 years ago

Now this made part one not so bad. I thought this was a great pay-back. Loved it!

TransguycharlieTransguycharlie8 months ago

Fuck, that was hot and I’m so turned on

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