All Comments on 'The Camping Trip'

Good start on a series....

... do more with these characters. Great start on a series. What happens to threesome when they go back to City? Does "Pixie" join in? Wow!

R1

I agree...you need to continue. The characters are totally believable and would love to see where things go when the "pact" is over. Or is it? "Pixie" definitely needs to get involved, too. Great first submissions. You must have posted elsewhere, though. No way this is your attempt at it. These are great!

This is fantastic! Please add more! Much More!!!

Great job! Wonderfully writen!

So whose baby is she going to have?