All Comments on 'The Camping Trip'

Great story !!!!!!!!!!

Whens the follow up coming

I will be looking to see where this goes. Pretty good start.

This story was excellent! We need more chapters to it now! ☺

Thank you so much for the comments. They really inspire me to keep writing my personal fantasies. I just finished, 'My Son's Christmas Present', another story in the 'A Mother's Desires' series. If you liked this story, you will love My Son's Christmas Present. I will start on part 2 to this story since you guys like it and want more. If you liked this story, check out my profile for links to my website and others, where you will find Image Sets, a Graphic Novel, 100 page Comic and a 10 minute Video of this story. If my Dark Fantasies made you cum and you want more, then please consider supporting me via a subscription on my site or by purchasing my videos, so I can continue to make great content. Thanks guys, I hope I made you cum hard ;)

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Thank you for the great comments. They really help encourage me to continue writing out my fantasies for you to enjoy. I just finished 'My Son's Christmas Present', another story in the 'Mother's Desires' series, which I am sure you will love. After I finish the graphic novel, comic and video that go with the story, I will start on part 2 to 'The Camping Trip' Since you liked it. Thank you, I hope I made you cum hard ;)

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This story is all one sided, she does all the talking.

The poor kid, only has about twenty words in the

whole story.This story needs lots of help, all I can

say is maybe it's a start Good luck.

Very well written. Enjoyed reading. Hope there is more coming, pardon the pun!!

Good start. There are a couple of issues though. It seems you got a sale on commas and spread them liberally throughout your story and didn't use them where needed. Also, it is "asshole" not "ass whole". I would suggest any further submission be run by an editor who should then be able to catch those small mistakes. Looking forward to Chapter 2.

I'd love to see this story continue.

Filled with lame verbage, no reality at all.

Great story. Loved the long slow burn and yearning, along with the moms internal dialogue. I noticed a bunch of typos but still gave it 5*s. Well done!

Please let him fuck you when you get home. It's the only way you'll both be satisfied!

Great story keep going with it

Please stop becoming lazy you got a great talent and you are not using it properly this would be a great chance to do a part 2 like I don’t know probably she ends up pregnant but you are becoming lazy these stories need more not just write something then get fed up with it look how many people love your story they are asking for more please don’t just walk away from these stories please get back in there and write use that talent what you have to it’s potential

Loved the thoughts running through mom's brain when she sees John's erection. So realistic of seeing him as a man and potential lover. Her waking to such a beautiful hard on is very erotic.

I felt the story was well planned out and written but I was a bit turned off by the mere mention of an oversized cock. You put effort in to the story to make it realistic and then spoiled it :(