by SkylerLuv
Once again you've wrote an amazing story. Perfection. You nearly made my heart stop thinking Helen was going to die. So evil but I forgive you as she survived and lived happily ever after. I'm a happy bunny so thank you.
Nice development and good twists. I knew the uncle would have to go and that somehow Helen and Beth would end up together. You still made the trip interesting.
Delightful, crazy, erotic and very romantic. Thanks for sharing from your wonderfully wild imagination.
Excellent story of adventure and love. Great imagery and dialogue that helps to really engulf you in the world. Thank you for sharing!
Good length, not too short and long enough, and I enjoy the humor you sprinkle in your work. Great job!
Another great story! I really like the setting of this one, it reminds me of 'Fiery passion'. It's mysterious athmospere and power dynamics are very well done. Your stories are always unique and beautiful in their own way. Keep it up.
Fabulous lovely tale ..... Unfortunately a short story but a wonderful enchanting one ...... Great
What a fantastically wonderful story! The anachronisms just lighten to mood and bring flashes of humour. And the passion, the heartfelt sex scenes and the good writing make this an all- time fave!
I'm not much of a reader, but this definitely kept my attention. I loved every passage in this story ♡
Once again I was enthralled and could not stop until the conclusion. So glad to have found your page.