by Victoria13
So sorry to hear that. First try at it hopefully will get better next time.
That 'Total crap' comment is total crap.
I think that the flow and speed of this story is just perfect. And the ending makes me crave more.
Brilliant work.
This was a pleasant reminder for me. Thank you ! Lets go on another car ride in a van maybe full of friends and this time no panties. What a treat if she got lucky to have to ride his hard cock on and off without the others finding out..