All Comments on 'The Car Wash Ch. 01'

Wow! How can a story with not much more than kissing be so fucking erotic??!! Great job slow playing the attraction between mom and son. The anticipation is always way hotter than the physical act.

Oh man. I loved this. I need more!

Great story. I love how the mother and son both act spontaneously and now I'm hoping it will turn into more.

Nice start. Waiting anxiously for the next part.

Like said before, I'm waiting on the next part. This is titled chapter 1 after all.

Great potential.

Looking forward to it.

One of my friends from high school i remember every time we left his house to go somewhere he would always kiss his mom on the lips and linger and i saw him kiss his sister like that too back then i never thought anything about it but i wonder if they did more than just kiss.....

You have a wonderful way of setting intrigue. Always a good read when written by you. Thanks and look forward to next installment.

Love it. So are you telling me I might be able to fuck my mother? If so, give me more.

I think any man can fuck his mother if he applies himself. I'm going to give it a shot. I just have to find a good car wash.

Please tell me there will be a part 2 very, very soon

I had to go back and read this story again; it is so good and has enough suspense to make the reader anxious for more chapters. I hope you continue this story.

Damn. You made me notice that my mom's car is getting pretty dirty.

I love that, "you wanna make out?" Even if she says no, you've put a thought in her head.

Great story! We need Ch. 2 please! Hope to see more of your work soon.

please continue