All Comments on 'The Caretaker'

Brilliant!

Poetic justice X 10. The kind of deserved retribution you can only fantasize (or read) about. Fun and gratifying. Left me grinning.

Seems too good to be true .... wishful thinking about a few worthy candidates for next projects ...

Wow, and I thought I was messed up! But, I did love it!

Short, sweet (maybe not so sweet) and to the point. 5*

Yes! That's 5 stars and a lot of fun!

Love your stories!! Never a doubt that your MC will have a set of balls and he's not afraid to use them!! Something that is getting very rare on Lit lately. 5* for me.

Shame it is fiction and not everyday business to our corrupt justice system.

Reads like written by a high school drop out, who tells it like it should be vs po-litic=ally corrupt(correct)

great yarn. Does the the wife survive???

*** The facts nothing but the facts. Thanks for sharing.

Spooky as hell!

5

Thanks for a fun read! Full marks from me.

I, for one, seriously enjoy your drivel, and I hope to read more of it.

Ha, what a fun tale! Some people think they're untouchable....careful who you fuck with as you just might piss of the wrong person. You can run but you can't hide.

A few errors, but it's a really good story. Reminds me of another in LW category where the wife thought the guy was just a "Cleaner". He was but he cleaned up after the mob!

I was wondering why he gave his job away but then you answered it with the magic box that wiped out the recording.

a very short story that tells all and in a few words. A world of information in a short conversation. Well done. I will have to read more of your so called drivel. Thanks for the hard work.

Woodmanone

This is exactly what I come here for: serious stories grounded in reality with absolutely no hint of adolescent wish fulfillment. Bravo!

Nice!

Five Stars! Not drivel. Your intro reminded me of JimBob44, he didn't give a damn either.

Mmmm. Yup, very well done! *****

Well done! Yep, a very good time for a vacation, lol.

Fantasy, or maybe not.

Great story!

BTB as in burn the bastard........Literally!!!!!

Drivel yes but what drivel! *****

Each story is better than the previous one yet another 5* This author should deal with all the cheating wives and their lovers

I know you do not read comments especially from Anonymous. I would love to read a version of George Anderson's February Sucks from you. Your type of Jim could replace the Jim that was Linda's husband. Let the carnage fly.

Short and sweet. It was quite clear she played the wrong guy but at least she got to live probably.

This was hard-core. And, I enjoyed the hell out of it. Thank you. S. F.

GREAT

Hard core and funny.

Thanks

Great. LOL

One of my favorite stories.

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excelente, me saco una sonrisa no erótica jajajaaj

Hehe. Dark and brutal.

Ahhh one of the great love stories of our time.

Loved it.

Cheaters deserve to burn in hell

nice, more justice served.

This is so good I was wanting more. 5 stars from Xluckylee

4.5 stars. While I can appreciate "I don't care enough to be bothered" attitude about the ex-wife, I don't think she deserved to get away with it so lightly, so half a star off. Her boss didn't lie at the alter about "loving" the MC, she did. She deserved to die more than her bf.

This story really warmed my heart, got me all toasty warm.

Man you have a knack for this flash ones. Been knocking em out the park!

Could have been a great story, had great potential, but it just turned really weak with all the superhero super capable hero with all the connections and all the money in the world. Anybody can write a happy ending with garbage like that. Be a real writer. Write something to which the average person can relate...