All Comments on 'The Casbah'

a Hollywood film." LOL - liked that. Loved your description of the tour, I was quite drawn to that and could completely see the story unfolding infront of me. 'Even the house walls looked like they had leprosy,' was a perfect description. You kept with history, genre references/techniques/tone, and I enjoyed the stage sequence. Noticed some editing things :) Otherwise, quite an enjoyable story.

Ken Follet watch out!

Reads like a good action novel.

Almost too good a spoof.

Another 5-star effort! Felt like I was along for the ride the whole way and appreciated the surprise (to me, anyway, haha) plot resolution at the ending.