All Comments on 'The Case of Elaine Stanson'

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kjohns2001kjohns2001over 5 years ago
Wow!

Unbelievably great, except for the third person bits but that's just me. I can't wait to read more about these characters. The use of a medium who is a police officer is fascinating, and the reasoning as to why he would keep it a secret is spot on.

I feel that you have a real winner here and will not be surprised if it ends up being a hall of fame story real soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Good start

Overall good opening case for this duo. There are a few fairly minor issues (mainly in how you move between characters) but these do not detract from a good premise and well structured story.

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