by Ballstretcher
Unbelievably great, except for the third person bits but that's just me. I can't wait to read more about these characters. The use of a medium who is a police officer is fascinating, and the reasoning as to why he would keep it a secret is spot on.
I feel that you have a real winner here and will not be surprised if it ends up being a hall of fame story real soon.
Overall good opening case for this duo. There are a few fairly minor issues (mainly in how you move between characters) but these do not detract from a good premise and well structured story.