All Comments on 'The Case of the Sneaky Valentine'

This is a lovely, positive story. I enjoyed how supporting the kids are. Thanks for both writing this long ago and leaving it here so we can continue to enjoy it.

Such a beautiful story. I applaud your patience in allowing the story to develop. So loving and romantically drawn. I fell fully in love with the main characters and congratulate you on some lovely writing that painted an adorable picture. Truly lovely.

Well done you, you made a grown old cry with your wonderful writing, I am now off to read the rest of your stories.

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I gave it 5Stars because that's all they allow but if I could have I would have given it at least 10. It was that good.

Re-reading the story for the umpteenth-time since I stumbeled upon it 9 years ago: it still ist one of my absulute favorires. I hope you continue writing even though you don't publish here any more.

I am a 79 year old male and 1st started using this site about 10 years ago for titillation reasons. Once I discovered "Scatty Sue" the other writers just didn't have the same appeal. I have read all of Sue's stories 4 times and "Sneaky" 5 times, just finished again and I will probably read the others again. Sue, your writings are so real, so sensitive and so heartwarming. (bringing tears to my eyes) I have read many of the other comments, so all has been said. The one sadness I have is the lack of recent writings. I do hope you are directing your great talents elsewhere and if so I wish I new where, so I could follow you.

Aaawww… loved this! Please! These are storiesI I need! And love! Zoe and Sarah are a wonderful couple.

Very moving. Tears were shed. You write wonderfully.

Still a wonderful story. 3rd time around.

Brilliant story of two beautiful people destined to be together.

A Great Story!

Brilliant, really good characters, a great storyline and a very happy ending!

Outstanding!

Thank you!

Absolutely fantastic. Superbly put together about the feelings between the 2 main characters and how they FINALLY get what they both really need. The build up was great and, as has been said, this was a true romance story with erotic episodes that fit correctly in to the story. WONDERFUL!! Thank you for a great story.

I LOVED THIS BEAUTIFUL STORY!!!!!

Thank you for writing such a loving story. Wonderfully written and beautiful in its composition..

Similarly to other comments, I really loved the way you wrote the sex scenes. This isn't a porn site it's for erotic stories, and there is nothing more erotica, than tow people in love and loving each other .

Wonderful story.I teared up more than once as I was reading it.(And I'm a 60 year old man!!).I have read your other stories and can't praise you enough.If I could give you more stars I would.Keep up the good work.

What an amazing story. Well written with a good story, good character development and love.

Such a good story! I honestly could have had even more of them being friends and wading through hard things together, but overall it was great! Thanks for writing it!

Second time around and still just as enjoyable

Beautiful

wow! what a great story. I am enjoying your stories, so descriptive, so intimate, so carefully engineered, so informative and great feel good sentiment.

Great balance of realism and relatability, eroticism not over played unlike some American authors.

I find it difficult to extol sufficient praise on this presentation, it is just brilliant.

came to read again !!! holiday season making me emotional cluster… I love this story

happy new year all… I hope y’all find love and happiness

This story is GREAT! Loved it!

It feels real. Just the way it should be, not perfect but life.

A beautiful love story that didn't have any of the crudeness that some writers believe needs to be included to make it erotic. Keep up the good work.

What a wonderful story…totally love it 5 ⭐️

Just wonderful! Please, both prospective and actual Authors out there, don’t worry about submitting a long story, they’re the best ones!

5⭐️ Many thanks for writing and posting, cheers Ppfzz.

Great story, would love to see a Tina and Chloe story

Such a wonderful and moving story...and the sex is super hot so it's like a wonderful bonus! Thanks for sharing!

Fabulous story. Thanks.

Dam good story

Some stories deserve to be re-read, from time to time.

I'd really like to be a parent to Tina and Chloe. Such lovely girls.

Amazingly beautiful…

Just re-read this again.. loved it just as much as the first time! Thank you again for writing such a lovely, well composed story x

One of the sweetest stories on the site...I find myself coming back time and again to spend time with Sarah and Zoe and the twins. This might be best story you ever posted.

My third time reading this... I made me laugh, smile a little even, and yes a tear or two, but isn't that life in it's self?

Just lovely. Thank you.

Loved it.

Second read was just as wonderful.

It was worth every minute it took to read this. Sarah and Zoe make a good pair. The twins were adorable, and a loving family was had by all. Just makes me all misty. Excellent writing.

This made my heart sing ..... Fab fab fabulous

Masterpiece poetry lovestory and the twins are enchanting, may want to order a couple too ...... Sue this is soooo lovely written so detailed slow burning and a little rollercoaster action ...... 5 stars not enough

Amazing well written love story, will be reading more of your work.

Being a resolutely hetero guy, I generally don’t bother with stories in this category, but guess what—love is still love, and it doesn’t matter what package it comes in. I’m glad that I stumbled onto this one. Bravo. 5 stars.

Amazingly written and one of my new favorite stories on here. I’ll definitely be checking out more of your work.

OMFGGG THIS IS DEFINITELY ONE OF MY FAVS STORY IN HERE!!! <3

Thankyou!

I really enjoyed this. Warm and fuzzy feelings!

Lovely! You made an old guy go all teary … ❤️

Who's peeling onions here?! Gawddd..

Absolutely brilliant please do more, there was so much love put into the story.

A truly lovely and perfect story. Thank you for sharing it with us.

It was pretty obvious where this was going, but it's not the destination, it's the journey.

And this was a very nice journey. Good work.

very sweet...can´t stand the english accent, though. bloke, yecch!...

Too too long.

No tears left. OMG, what a great story. I think I’m dehydrated from my eyes leaking so much.

Thank you so much for sharing,

And here I thought you British were all stiff upper lip and undemonstrative. Oh well, I guess the Beatles put an end to all that. Great story and very tear jerking.

I come back to this every year, because it’s sweet and heartwarming and so well written. I would honestly pay real money for your work in ebook form - it’s better than a lot of published romance novels out there.

If you *do* publish, could you tell us the author name you write under?

:)

So sweet, so sexy, so heartwarming. Thank you

So very beautiful.

So very well written.

I find myself jealous of your writing talent AND the love found by her characters.

Thank you.

ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL

Very good and lovely story and very true to how things can be.

I love the whole story! You should never apologize to your readers about the length of the story or how long it takes to get to the sex. Great, great, great story.

This is a most beautiful love story. So beautifully written, such compulsive reading, I’m not ashamed to confess I shed a tear after reading Zoe’s letter to Sarah.

Thank you ScattySue! X

I have read many stories on this site, but while reading this, I lost track of the fact that I was on the Literotica site. I am a 75 year old male, and this is one of the most beautiful stories I have ever read. You made my eyes water at times, with the tenderness and emotion that you expressed. Such a beautiful plot as well,

Scatty Sue, you are a mainstream author! I won't be presumptuous to give advice. You definitely dont need it. This is one story that I will save to read again and again.

Please give us more XXX

Absolutely first class. A long story but not at all dragging out. Well written throughout with really lovely touches in places, especially with her understanding girls and the teacher. So pleased it worked out as it did. Definitely 5 stars.

Longer than I thought it would be, but excellent writing. Well done!

I have just read this story though twice and so nice to read a story about two english ladies and all the highs and lows hope we get to read the next story when they get married and love each other forever and the girls enjoy being with two mums. Thank you ScattySue brilliantly written and told story. xxxx

Thank you for this beautiful love story, full of devotion and deep passion.

Such a joy to read and (Yeay!) English! There's nothing wrong with all the American stories on here but it's so much more comfortable when everything is familiar (pun intended).

That was either good research or you know archery well. The only thing that puzzled me initially was Recurve or Compound... but that became clear. So glad it was a six gold end, not anything crass like a Robin Hood!

Lovely writing. Give us more.... please.

The most beautiful story ever written. I ended up crying many times as I read this romantic story! I look forward to reading more stories from you.

As a younger girl who met and fell in love with a slightly older woman I can relate so readily to this. Fabulous reading and the sexy bits were done so well. Love between two women is such a wonderful thing, sensuous, sensual and oh so sexy.

You will always get 5 stars on your stories from me! I can't remember how many times i have read this story but it is absolutely the best as the first time i read it. one of your best works in my book. from one of your favorite readers Marcus Horton U.S.A.

I have read this story many times and it always brings a tear to my eye. Thank you for writing this!

This is now one of my favorite stories! I’m so glad you couldn’t cut it. My absolute favorites are the ones who actually tell a story and that takes talent and length. Also what makes this story one of the best is that there were both tiers and hot sex. Thank you for a great read!

Long it might be but just such a delicious story, keeps you wanting to read more to get to the end

Thank you for the story

.....i fell in love with the story from first word to last like Zoe to Sarah it had me frustrated and beyond happy, feeling all emotions. Its stories like this that give me hope....and pleasure xxx

You've done again nye on perfection loved the characters and the ending

I have read this story four times and each time it pulls at the heart. An absolutely beautiful story about the power of love to change a life for the better.

Had all the emotions going. Beautiful story.

................. a sweet Valentines Day treasure.

Well thought out and well presented, congratulations ScattySue

Thank you for writing this insightful and moving tale about the power and delicacy

of loving. You made my morning vastly improved, and gave much to think about. Thank you! Comments written by 80 year white male

Absolutely loved every line of this. Very good storyline it held me from start to finish

What an amazing and beautiful story. I adored it!

What a Beautiful Story.....I loved it. X

I keep coming back to read this story again and again. Joyous character development and a perfect pacing to the plot.

Such an enjoyable experience!

I loved the drama of this story and I loved how the school teacher helped the mother sort out her problem.

Absolutely the best story I have ever read. The twins they were amazing at getting their mum to realize that she needed Zoe and that they were on board and to listen to her heart not her mind. All the characters in the story flowed perfectly especially the teacher on the phone Ms. Penny Drake. Keep up the great stories this one was mindblowing perfect!

Signed hmarcus2415@hotmail.com/Marcus Horton U.S.A.

I have read this story a few times. I find myself skipping past the sex because i enjoy the character interactions more. Love it.

But why on Earth would anyone use words like clitty and cunny? I almost gave up each time I read them. I'm glad I didn't but they cheapened the story a lot.

So good the leisurely way the story built to its climax. An erotic story so well told.

I really don't believe in ratings and votes and all, Sue is no doubt the best author around and this is probably the best story ever published on literotica (lesbian section) along with haunted by love

This is nearly a novella!! And that is not a bad thing at all. Not just the characters but the entire story is so well developed. Over the last 18 months or so I have just finished reading this story for the 6th time, enjoying the richness and love ever more with each return! Thank you so very much!

I don't know where to begin, first off I feel that the characters should receive the first praise. They are amazing and constantly lovable. Then there's the story itself and how heartwarming it is. I love the long and increasingly personal and touching buildup that engrosses the reader into the story. I will also say I was almost in tears from Sarah leaving Zoe and especially after Zoe's confession letter, and this is shocking because I rarely cry. I truly do commend you on such a wonderful story.

I found this story on Amazon as a kindle unlimited eBook. No worries if you published it, but thought to let you know. If you need screenshots or other information just send me a message.

having read this with tears also , thank you so very much for sharing such a well written story .

You know how most stories here like have too little character build up or none at all? Well this was far far better. A beautifully written story.

Sometimes I get bored with long stories but I just couldn't stop reading this one, tears were streaming down my face on more than one occasion and the twins made me smile, they were the stars of the story in my eyes.

Love between two people, whatever their gender, is a wonderful thing. This story was long but it had everything I would like to find in a relationship. Sex on its own can be great but for me the love that grew between two friends was complemented by the sex as a natural part of love for each other. A great story from beginning to end.

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. The writing flowed easily and the leisurely pace of how Sarah and Zoe's relationship blossomed first into friendship and then into love made the entire tale even more poignant. Sarah's precocious twin girls added another pleasant aspect to the story. Unfortunately, you can only award five stars to this submit tap, since I would have easily given it ten.

When I need some romance in my life, I come back to this story (and a few others), because it never disappoints! Thank you so very much for sharing this with us!

Beautiful love story

The twins were wise beyond their years.

Why didn't she initiate divorce proceedings right after Roy walked out? He wasn't coming back and she didn't want him to.

you've written an engaging, touching, funny story; it's a real pearl. (i usually don't read stories more than five pages long and i usually avoid stories that deal with coming out.) i simply couldn't tear my eyes away from this one! the characters captivated me and the tenderness enchanted me. thank you for sharing this wonderful masterwork with us fortunate readers.

This is a well written story, and i just loved it. The warmth and caring in it was fabulous. Maybe the behind closed doors bit to follow.