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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Very nicely written, very evocative. But please be careful with taught and taut, and I suspect 'obscurity' was meant to be 'absurdity'. All in all though, thank you!

Venusinaphrodite_Venusinaphrodite_almost 3 years agoAuthor

Oh thank you so much for catching those!🙏 I can't believe those slipped by me while editing but I appreciate you bringing it to my attention🖤 thank you for the read and feedback!

naughtyandy4unaughtyandy4ualmost 3 years ago

Off the chart. I could sense the rush you had writing this when breasts became breaths. Ricky is a very lucky chap.

Your excitement clearly shows through and a couple of times i had to slow down my reading as I was caught up in you. Very arousing read.

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