All Comments on 'The Cat and the Kitten Ch. 04'

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dwoelfledwoelflealmost 6 years ago
Nice story but

You told a fun tale but just jumped several times as well as typos throughout. An editor could help or just do a pause review (finish, edit, leave for a couple of days and then review again).

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Awesome

Can't wait for Ch 5!

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